O I'd love to read this... I know that there is so much more going on in this marvellous piece than I grasp.
By the way, I cannot make up my mind as to whether I can hear the "r"s in
All your daughters of Zion
All your Abraham sons
sometimes I do, sometimes I don't
I continue to admire your (plural - partiyulraly Carl and slaneman, I suppose) ability to get down in writing those barely discernible bits (usually as here at the beginning of songs). I can clearly hear the odd bit here and there, once I've seen your transcription - thanks!